ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
Suggested Deviants
Suggested Collections
You Might Like…
Comments9
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
This is very good so far - a few suggestions (for the writers sanity)
Have a plot line for each of ur main characters - cos this is a novel and things get confusing. Set out major things - like meeting jack ect.
Also, run a few drafts in ur mind before u type (ur using a typewriter, right? If not, that the best button on the keyboard is backspace!)
okay advise over........
a few questions on my part (i am vry curious)
What is the central thing that is linking all these character together? The fountain? or the Candy?
And who r all these people? (i get confused eaily, but yeh)
and yeh, i think thats it........
Have a plot line for each of ur main characters - cos this is a novel and things get confusing. Set out major things - like meeting jack ect.
Also, run a few drafts in ur mind before u type (ur using a typewriter, right? If not, that the best button on the keyboard is backspace!)
okay advise over........
a few questions on my part (i am vry curious)
What is the central thing that is linking all these character together? The fountain? or the Candy?
And who r all these people? (i get confused eaily, but yeh)
and yeh, i think thats it........